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Ok peeps....
I'm going to compose a new song here with the help of you peeps. I have not tot of the melody/tempo yet as I want the lyrics to lead the way...
So it's gonna be in mandarin and initial concept by bro mos....working titties is called: 小木马
Ok serious now. Here's the format. Just fill in the blanks. Here we go....
小木马
詞: Ah Mos, Ah Meltz, Ah Neh, Ah Midz, Ah Cud (and counting...)
曲: Ah Neh
Verse 1: (set the premise - good memories)
骑着童年熟悉的小木马 (ah mos)
- - - - - - - - - -Remembering the good o'days with the ger??
依稀梦里曾牵着你的手
- - - - - - - - - -Describe the girl then, why you love her so?
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Chorus1: (the highlights)
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讓你和他遠走高飛 (ah neh)
騎著木馬的我卻只能留 (還) 在原地 (ah neh)
Alternative ending 1:
小木马依然熟悉, 对你的爱已慢慢淡去..... (ah meltz - amended by ah mos)
Alternative ending 2:
Dan ni yi jing bu zhai wo sheng bian, Jiao wo ru he qu mian dui (Ah Midz)
Alternative ending 3:
风轻轻的吹着 雨细细的飘着 望着陈旧的小木马 只剩下你和我的回忆 (Ah Meltz)
Alternative ending 4:
chen jiu de mu ma qing qing de yao zhe, hui yi ye shui zhe xuan lu man man fu xian.
wo xiang wang zhe dang nian wo men de nuo yan, jiu xiang tong nian tui mu ma de du ai (Ah Cud)
Verse 2: (development)
- - - - - - - - -What happeneded?
- - - - - - - - -Describe the ger now? Why angry/fustrated, etc..?
后悔当初松开你的手 没有陪你走完下半辈子 让你一个人孤单寂寞 (Ah Meltz)
纵使诉不完的相思情 天涯也心若咫尺 (Ah Mos)
Tips: Try to decribe moods/thoughts using an action, image, scene, analogy etc...try not to describe a mood with moods....In order to avoid cliches, we have to think creatively. E.g. 洋蔥
Disclaimer: I reserve the rights to augment and make the final adjustment to the placement of the lyrics. I will duly credit and submit all the contributors should the song be signed by a record firm. Now, let's rock and roll!
Edited by nehpyh 30 Apr `08, 4:22PM
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chen jiu de mu ma qing qing de yao zhe, hui yi ye shui zhe xuan lu man man fu xian.
wo xiang wang zhe dang nian wo men de nuo yan, jiu xiang tong nian tui mu ma de du ai
sorry ah.. company dun have chinese writing software.. not even windows language bar.. this is my first try.. just for fun~ don't mind my noob words..
English for understanding.
the old wooden horse swayed silently, the nostagic past seems to appear in front of me.
I looked forward to our promise, just like our once innocent love for the wooden horse.
Edited by cuddles 30 Apr `08, 11:17AM
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Originally posted by nehpyh:
小木马
Verse 1: (set the premise)
依稀梦里曾牵着你的手 骑着那童年熟悉的小木马 (ah mos)
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Chorus1: (the highlights)
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讓你和他遠走高飛 (ah neh)
騎著木馬的我卻只能留 (還) 在原地 (ah neh)
Verse 2: (development)
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讓你和他遠走高飛 (ah neh)
騎著木馬的我卻只能留 (還) 在原地 (ah neh)
are we supposed to sing out the ah neh?
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i not wanna be bert. i m bert!
