The O levels are in a week's time and I'm still unsure on the æŠ¥ç« æŠ¥é�“ . Does it go like this?
first para: copy qn and after that, 读了这份报��，我感到.....。
next para: List down the åŽŸå› . Write åŽŸå› from these aspects: Individuals, families, schools, government, society.
Following Paragraph, write 影���果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn).
With the addition of : ä¿—è¯ï¼šæ‰€è°““冰冻三尺，é�žä¸€æ—¥ä¹‹å¯’”ï¼Œä»¥ä¸Šçš„åŽŸå› ä¼šå¯¼è‡´ä¸¥é‡�çš„å�Žæžœï¼š
Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: é�’少年太过ä¾�赖手机…) . 综上所述，é�’少年太过ä¾�èµ–æ‰‹æœºæ˜¯å› ä¸º (write
åŽŸå› .. the main points, then the consequences).
How to end 公函 as in the conclusion??
Originally posted by NerdzRulz:The O levels are in a week's time and I'm still unsure on the æŠ¥ç« æŠ¥é�“ . Does it go like this?
first para: copy qn and after that, 读了这份报��，我感到.....。
next para: List down the åŽŸå› . Write åŽŸå› from these aspects: Individuals, families, schools, government, society.
Following Paragraph, write 影���果 [Consequences] (depends on the qn).
With the addition of : ä¿—è¯ï¼šæ‰€è°““冰冻三尺，é�žä¸€æ—¥ä¹‹å¯’”ï¼Œä»¥ä¸Šçš„åŽŸå› ä¼šå¯¼è‡´ä¸¥é‡�çš„å�Žæžœï¼š
Your conclusion (E.g. the qn is: é�’少年太过ä¾�赖手机…) . 综上所述，é�’少年太过ä¾�èµ–æ‰‹æœºæ˜¯å› ä¸º (write åŽŸå› .. the main points, then the consequences).How to end 公函 as in the conclusion??
For your æŠ¥ç« æŠ¥é�“, your format is okay, so no worries there.
For 公函, there are a few ways to end it, depending on what is it about.
Here are some of the more common ones ( Translate yourself : D ):
1) We hope that you could accept our invitation.
2) Please send us your reply ASAP
3) Thank You for your cooperation
4) Please arrange a time for us to meet.
5) If there is any queries, please call XXXXX
6) If there is anything wrong, please point it out.
Usually you will want to end with 'Thank You' if it is not already in the last few sentences.
Originally posted by Forbiddensinner:5) If there is any queries, please call XXXXX
For the XXXXX, do we make up our own number in chinese or in numerals?
Normally we don't give call back number bah, when you write a letter, keep it to a letter reply and not email, phone call etc so don't provide those information
Originally posted by dkcx:Normally we don't give call back number bah, when you write a letter, keep it to a letter reply and not email, phone call etc so don't provide those information
In the case where the 公函 is about you representing your company and offering a product or agreement to another company, giving a call back no. is necessarily. Oh, and you might also want to add a name to the phone no, almost forgot.
urm for gong han juz end with "please reply soon, thak you" in mandarin =) i'm sec 2 this year but in IP program so no o level ^ ^ good luck =) as for yi lun wen just write about the article lor
Originally posted by Forbiddensinner:In the case where the 公函 is about you representing your company and offering a product or agreement to another company, giving a call back no. is necessarily. Oh, and you might also want to add a name to the phone no, almost forgot.
Gong han these days got write to represent a company 1 meh? My time it was more like asking for sponsership or letters to authority etc etc.
How do I start writing the conclusion of a complaint letter for 公函 ?
Originally posted by NerdzRulz:How do I start writing the conclusion of a complaint letter for 公函 ?
Say things like your company have always have a good reputation etc to suck up to the person then next line just write something like hopefully something can be done about this issue or hope for a reply soon should do.
Originally posted by dkcx:Say things like your company have always have a good reputation etc to suck up to the person then next line just write something like hopefully something can be done about this issue or hope for a reply soon should do.
what if it's a member of the public complaining? For example, complaining about cleanliness of certain food stall.
Originally posted by NerdzRulz:what if it's a member of the public complaining? For example, complaining about cleanliness of certain food stall.
same thing applies.
Originally posted by NerdzRulz:what if it's a member of the public complaining? For example, complaining about cleanliness of certain food stall.
Most of the ending of gong han is often juz sucking up to the person to make them feel good then u ask them to take action.
NOTE
PLEASE DO NOT USE UR OWN NAME/PHONE NUMBER OR WHATSOEVER THAT CAN BE USED TO INDENTIFY YOU.......it is a very SERIOUS offence to do that and it will be used to TREAT THAT YOU ARE IN CAHOOTS with the marker, penality : 5 marks deduction.
Use the name given for answerer and if you need other details..such as school....use the address given to help you formulate
halo . my cher teach for the newspaper de is suggestions followed by conclusion?
Originally posted by dkcx:Gong han these days got write to represent a company 1 meh? My time it was more like asking for sponsership or letters to authority etc etc.
Very rarely. And most likely not in "O" levels. But it is quite often last time for "A" level Chinese, which should be the equivalent of H2 chinese now.
Originally posted by yiha093:halo . my cher teach for the newspaper de is suggestions followed by conclusion?
Is it a must to provide suggestions?
Originally posted by NerdzRulz:Is it a must to provide suggestions?
That depends on the issue you are writing about. Not every issue is practical to offer suggestions
er. if u read the hao zhuo wen , if ur school buys it, it is seen in all / 99% of the newspaper articles essays . so.... what u think? lol