doubts on chinese

• yiha093

  30 May 09, 19:28

  halo ! got qn.

  when u write the reasons for the bao zhang bao dao , do u write the sayings 1st then explain or explain enforced by the sayings ?

   

  i asked a teacher, she say its wrong, but i see hao zhuo wen got that style. how? ._.

   

• FireIce

  30 May 09, 19:35

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• yiha093

  30 May 09, 20:00

  halo. what u said i noe

  what i wanna noe is, How to incorporate the sayings into my reasons/ suggestings/ do i put saying 1st followed by reasons or reasonings followed by sayins?  ?

  btw need effects also. x )

• dkcx

  30 May 09, 20:04

  I think sayings 1st then u explain it with ur reasons

• FireIce

  30 May 09, 20:04

  wat sayings?

• yiha093

  30 May 09, 20:05

  i do cher say must put behind............ omggggggggggggggg howwwwwwww .

• Forbiddensinner

  30 May 09, 23:01

  Originally posted by yiha093:

  i do cher say must put behind............ omggggggggggggggg howwwwwwww .

  Don't tell me you have only 1 chinese teacher in the whole school?

  Ask the other chinese teachers first, then conclude whether your teacher is right or not.

• hiphop2009

  31 May 09, 12:29

  You can do it either way ba.

  Most important, it must look logical to you. You can ask around.

• yiha093

  31 May 09, 13:01

  halo guys ! asked my china fren le, she suggests i write behind because i dun really noe how to link the things together ; ;  thnks~~~~~~~
  

• FireIce

  31 May 09, 17:15

  do u mean 所谓 <insert act-cheem 谚语 here> ???
  
  shd be in front. start of the para.
  
  but dun put for the sake of putting.
  
  i relli hate these "factory-produced" 作文 where everyone memorise and use those standard lines and phrases.
  u can pass but u wun get A.

• brainerror

  31 May 09, 17:16

  Anti- Chinese kid.
  sorry i no speak chinese.

• Forbiddensinner

  31 May 09, 17:18

  Originally posted by brainerror:

  Anti- Chinese kid.
  sorry i no speak chinese.

  Zzzzz....homework forum cannot spam one, will die der....

• brainerror

  31 May 09, 17:21

  i did not spam -.- 

• eeden.

  31 May 09, 17:24

  the sayings can put anywhere,as long as it's appropriate for the situation.most of the time it will be when making suggestions.habitually i'll put it at the first line,but it's up to you where you wanna add the saying.

• yiha093

  31 May 09, 21:01

  lol. at least got hua long dian jin ma. haha  !

  lol . i figure i would prefer putting the idiom to enforce my explain . the teacher i asked marks O lvl script , so i guess i better folo what she suggests... hais, hate it, doing it for the sake of marks....... but no choice x.x

• FireIce

  31 May 09, 21:44

  sometimes is 画蛇添足

• SBS n SMRT

  31 May 09, 22:42

  Originally posted by yiha093:

  lol. at least got hua long dian jin ma. haha  !

  lol . i figure i would prefer putting the idiom to enforce my explain . the teacher i asked marks O lvl script , so i guess i better folo what she suggests... hais, hate it, doing it for the sake of marks....... but no choice x.x

  the reality is...all chinese teachers mark o level script

• tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R

  31 May 09, 22:43

  Originally posted by SBS n SMRT:

  the reality is...all chinese teachers mark o level script

  XXX ERROR XXX

  not ALL chinese mark script...

  only ONE/TWO from each school...

  my cn cher is HOD, so i know XD

• brainerror

  31 May 09, 22:45

  calling me?

• tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R

  31 May 09, 22:48

  Originally posted by brainerror:

  calling me?

  
  PS... not calling u actually...

  aiya... now... i so scared lor...

  btw, what compo u all doing?

  3. 情景文

  4.议论文

  5.报章报�

• SBS n SMRT

  31 May 09, 22:55

  Originally posted by tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R:

  XXX ERROR XXX

  not ALL chinese mark script...

  only ONE/TWO from each school...

  my cn cher is HOD, so i know XD

  for mine school..is all......actually almost all chinese teachers mark o level scripts

  some tips from a CL A1 student

  1. 尽�写论说文和记述文，他们会给你更高的分数。

  2。审题时��心，��我好出题目的�师的用�，��看到一个热门�题就忽略了其他的细节而写了一些�对的文章。

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  Good luck

• tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R

  31 May 09, 22:58

  Originally posted by SBS n SMRT:

  for mine school..is all......actually almost all chinese teachers mark o level scripts

  some tips from a CL A1 student

  1. 尽�写论说文和记述文，他们会给你更高的分数。

  2。审题时��心，��我好出题目的�师的用�，��看到一个热门�题就忽略了其他的细节而写了一些�对的文章。

  3。�以举例，应用等多�论��充实你的文章。

  Good luck

  i'm actually getting sick of tips le...

  just dis week, i wrote more than 7 chinese compos. can u believe it? i still got more 大纲

   

  i dun eblieve oso...

• eeden.

  31 May 09, 22:58

  tip from another a1 student: when you feel that all questions suck,go back to bao zhang bao dao.that is the most play safe question to attempt.got me quite high marks always

• tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R

  31 May 09, 23:00

  Originally posted by eeden.:

  tip from another a1 student: when you feel that all questions suck,go back to bao zhang bao dao.that is the most play safe question to attempt.got me quite high marks always

  ERRRRRRR... u which yr one?

• eeden.

  31 May 09, 23:01

  Originally posted by tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R:

  ERRRRRRR... u which yr one?

  
  2007.diff syllabus?