O Level Chinese Paper 1162 1June09 Aftermath/Discussion
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Originally posted by TIB1049L:
开头, 解题, åŽŸå› , å�Žæžœ, 建议, 总结. As long as you mention in such a format should be okay, unless you go out of point. You must write out what caused them to litter for åŽŸå› , talk about what will happen if thus continue in å�Žæžœ (including corrective order according to my teacher), how to improvise on the situation and then concluding paragraphYa i did that, but added a lot of stuff in between. Will the extra stuff cause deduction?
Edit: Btw for one of the compre qns where the qn is how �观， 悲观 affects character, do we have to copy the whole para or just its last few lines containing the 生气勃勃 etc part?
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Originally posted by dadeadman1337:
Ya i did that, but added a lot of stuff in between. Will the extra stuff cause deduction?
Depends if your additional stuff goes out of point or couldn't "disguise" itself properly inside the original structure (which means what you write in the �果 portion isn't �果 and couldn't be counted as a �果 even if they mark leniently)And edited for the edit: I just copied the last few lines and added some of my own words. Chinese isn't like English whereby you will be deducted marks for writing excessive content, so it is safer to write more. But I don't mean copy the entire passage for the answer when I mean more
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I only write why those people are given corrective order for the åŽŸå› , the advantages of corrective order and no distinct å�Žæžœ paragraphs. Is this correct?
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lol. read the model essay hao zhuo wen. u see got what diff. thou i agree ther are also diff way of writing that essay !
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What were your 2 examples for the Wheelchair man question? Mine was the school, kena bullied but succeeded and the university, kena looked down on but succeeded.
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åŽŸå› i wrote that parents may be bad examples, schools nvr focus on moral ed, and parents may just raise but not teach values letting children get influenced by frens. å�Žæžœ i wrote that the enviroment may be polluted allowing spread of germs, uglifying the enviroment causing less tourism. However my hou guo was written also in both the sense of if people continue littering and the measures are not put in place. 建议 was the revamping of ed system, parents shld instill values, putting up of notices n dustbins. Points ok?
But i think my prob was that i used too much of the word 措施. Is that unacceptable?
Extra paras included the why the govt needed to implement this 措施 and what would happen if they didn't. Anyone have comments for me?
Edit: For the wheelchair man qn, i wrote that 他拥有�放弃的精神。To explain was his perserverance in med sch, and his wheelchair race. Is the wheelchair race a correct example? Coz its explaining his "not giving up".
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my examples on that handicapped guy was how he contributed to charity and he won a competition, breaking world record.
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i also wwrite no give up de jin shen ^ ^ . i write uni and school thou he handicapped
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Originally posted by NerdzRulz:
What were your 2 examples for the Wheelchair man question? Mine was the school, kena bullied but succeeded and the university, kena looked down on but succeeded.
2 e.g. for me is the kena bullied in school and university combined into one, and then the wheelchair kena stuck during the competition as the secondOriginally posted by dadeadman1337:åŽŸå› i wrote that parents may be bad examples, schools nvr focus on moral ed, and parents may just raise but not teach values letting children get influenced by frens. å�Žæžœ i wrote that the enviroment may be polluted allowing spread of germs, uglifying the enviroment causing less tourism. However my hou guo was written also in both the sense of if people continue littering and the measures are not put in place. 建议 was the revamping of ed system, parents shld instill values, putting up of notices n dustbins. Points ok?
But i think my prob was that i used too much of the word 措施. Is that unacceptable?
Extra paras included the why the govt needed to implement this 措施 and what would happen if they didn't. Anyone have comments for me?
Edit: For the wheelchair man qn, i wrote that 他拥有�放弃的精神。To explain was his perserverance in med sch, and his wheelchair race. Is the wheelchair race a correct example? Coz its explaining his "not giving up".
1. åŽŸå› I wrote parents bad examples and school never focus on moral education, but for the last one is they do it for their sake of convienience and are selfish, because they don't care about how other people think. Your's should be fine also
2. �果 I wrote will affect Singapore's name as "Garden City" and may affect tourism industry. According to my teacher you should also put in the punishment given in the question as a consequence
3. My 建议 is about the people needing to change their selfish mindset and should think of others before they act. Also, the parents should be good role models for their children and that the school need to care more about the moral education of the students.
4. As for your 措施 it may not be correct. I am not sure; best to ask your teacher the next time you see her/him
5. For the wheelchair man, I said he is very �强. The e.g. I used is underneath the first quote
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Originally posted by jay_rocks:
i did qn 2 and 4.
u did qn 4?how u write?
share?
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ok im thinking of creating a thread to store our results -.-''
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Originally posted by yiha093:
ok im thinking of creating a thread to store our results -.-''
AUG lah...a boit xian leh... straight aft Os nth to do, but stay at home SGF.. a bit loiner lor, i think...
wanna organise a SGF O level 09 outing tmr or sometime soon?
but not lyke 93'guy lah.. 1.30 nat EW2 wad cc mac =.=.. think ppl can fly there in such a short time =.=
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lol
BTW : NOTE
oral from 2 july to 16 july !!ENG oral from 17 Aug to 26 Aug !!
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Originally posted by yiha093:
lol
BTW : NOTE
oral from 2 july to 16 july !!ENG oral from 17 Aug to 26 Aug !!
i'l be the first few.btw what r all of ur index nos?
curious...
me is 0022
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Originally posted by tr@nsp0rt_F3V3R:
AUG lah...a boit xian leh... straight aft Os nth to do, but stay at home SGF.. a bit loiner lor, i think...
wanna organise a SGF O level 09 outing tmr or sometime soon?
but not lyke 93'guy lah.. 1.30 nat EW2 wad cc mac =.=.. think ppl can fly there in such a short time =.=
In the end it would almost become a Bus Enthu outing. Lots of us are born in 1993, including _______
me index is 0259
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i forgot mine, i just make sure match with paper then 4get about it. lol ! sorry i not bus enthu ! dun take it =X
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Originally posted by TIB1049L:
In the end it would almost become a Bus Enthu outing. Lots of us are born in 1993, including _______
me index is 0259
lol...dun mind...
btw index nos is out of all singapore or by school?
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Originally posted by yiha093:
i forgot mine, i just make sure match with paper then 4get about it. lol ! sorry i not bus enthu ! dun take it =X
lol.. ur seating arrangement?? -
By school. School Code followed by Index, so even index same, school code is different
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Originally posted by TIB1049L:
By school. School Code followed by Index, so even index same, school code is different
okay... phew lex...cuz my sch name is AD first school. thought we're the national's first
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Originally posted by TIB1049L:
By school. School Code followed by Index, so even index same, school code is different
okay... phew lex...cuz my sch name is AD first school. thought we're the national's first
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anyway, wish you all to have GOOD GRADES!! paiseh, can post the qns here ???
anyway...for bus fans...you will be sad as last year november got this qns
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Originally posted by SBS n SMRT:
anyway, wish you all to have GOOD GRADES!! paiseh, can post the qns here ???
anyway...for bus fans...you will be sad as last year november got this qns
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lol...but no one wld wanna do yi lun wen wad...
or seldom..
esp me and i thing one guy in sgf...
so wanna chat himn up and ask what he wrote
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Originally posted by SBS n SMRT:
anyway, wish you all to have GOOD GRADES!! paiseh, can post the qns here ???
anyway...for bus fans...you will be sad as last year november got this qns
4. 如何进æ¥å·´å£«ä¸Žåœ°é“�æœ�务
Lols. I wouldn't want to do the question; there is likely a case that I would go out of point by writing they should dump Volvo Mk4s on svcs with KUBs because the teachers won't know what I am writing =X -
Originally posted by TIB1049L:
Lols. I wouldn't want to do the question; there is likely a case that I would go out of point by writing they should dump Volvo Mk4s on svcs with KUBs because the teachers won't know what I am writing =Xi write the question, i had to constantly tell myself" cannot go technical terms and cannot go to too deep", in the end , my essay is just on PIW, BC standards, service frequency only.......but still get an ace